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Supporting busy mums who dream of writing a novel. From idea to finished manuscript.
Your story, elevated.
Developmental editing & book coaching
Specializing in romance, historical and contemporary fiction
The girl behind Victoria Jane Editorial
Hey Iām Victoriaā¦.
Iām a writer just like you!
Writing was always my safe place; it was how I could sense my thoughts and emotions. As a child and teen, I kept a million journals.I grew up on Art Attack and Mr. Dressup. Hello messy creativity.
But I struggled with self doubt and Iām a busy mum of threeā¦
I didnāt have a formal education in creative writing.
My spelling and grammar were less than stellar.
I believed I wasnāt creative enough.
Writing a book felt incredibly daunting.
Until I was wandering through a castle garden in Scotland and Elleās story hit me HARD, I knew I had to write it. That day, I finally admitted out loud I wanted to write a book.
I decided to start Victoria Jane Editorial because I LOVE supporting authors follow their dreams.
My expertise in developmental editing extends beyond the mechanics of storytelling. My role as a DE is to help you tap into your authentic voice and hype you up while providing supportive feedback.
Nothing brings me more joy than seeing authors fulfil their dreams and get their book in the hands of readers. If you are ready to take the leap-letās chat!
Your story matters
Your story matters
āSo make the friendship bracelets, take the moment and taste it.ā ā āYouāre On Your Own, Kidā
Sun sign: Aquarius
Favourite Movie: Erin Brochovitch & The Holiday
Favourite drink: Coffee
Favourite place: Ireland
Favourite book: Currently The Nightingale and Fall with Me
Favourite trope: Slow burn baby, he falls first and grumpy x sunshine
Taylor Swift song of the moment: Whoās Afraid of Little Old Me
Published Novels
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Working with Victoria on my manuscriptās developmental edit was a lovely experience. She was kind in addressing any problems in my writing . She helped with clear instructions on how to change my book for the better .She helped with details like character arcs , plot holes , motivation in characters , and even descriptions to help the reader feel immersed in my story. It was an overall encouraging and positive experience. I would recommend any new author ( like myself ) to work with her !
Danielle Wolf Eternal Blood
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Wow, it was absolutely incredible. I was so impressed by her attention to detail and the way she took the time to thoroughly read my story. As my first book baby, I was truly terrified to share it with others, but her feedback was not only amazing but also very thorough and insightful.
Smardline Sufra
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I love, love, love your feedback! Iām going to sit down and go through it more thoroughly, but I read each comment! Thank you!!!
Leslie Ballew
https://linktr.ee/lballewwrites
For those with an idea or half started draft
ā You have an idea for a story but are overwhelmed with how to start.
ā You want to write characters that readers love but so far they fall flat.
ā You are worried you donāt have the time to write and will never finish.
ā You crave accountability and work best when you have someone to bounce ideas off.
ā You love writing but sometimes feel guilty for spending time on your story.
What does book coaching look like?
What does book coaching look like?
Nourish: Three months book coaching
Taking you from idea to first draft. Nourish will support YOU during the writing process. Each week we will meet and workshop ideas, map out your story and create swoon worthy characters readers fall in love with.
3 x 50 min calls a month: This is where we workshop ideas, work on outlines, map out characters and dive into all the mechanics of writing fiction
Telegram support Wednesday-Friday: On demand support to bounce ideas, get feedback on writing and share.
10 pages of editing feedback per month: This is a great way to learn and grow as a writer. The feedback is designed to support YOU and look at whatās working and what might need shifting.
PRICES:
$475 per month or $1500 PIF CAD
*need a different payment plan-reach out.
Your story matters, letās tell it.
Book coaching is designed to take the stress out the writing process.
The is perfect for busy mums who dream of writing but feel guilty for not doing something for themselves. Nourished is meant to fill up YOUR cup and by default that spills into life outside of writing. If an idea is coming to you, thereās a reason.
FAQs
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Having someone in your corner hyping you up can be a HUGE game changer. Book coaching blends support, accountability and on demand feedback.
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Yes! Book coaching 350 per month or 1050 PIF.
There is an option to extend the payment plan to six months
*3 month minimum-this also gives you the most bang -
You get 3 x50 min calls per month. In my experience this doesn't overwhelm your system.
Wednesday-Friday telegram support
10 pages of editing feedback per month. -
That depends on many factors. The goal with Nourish is to set you up for success. You will leave with clear ideas and direction. Even if you don't finish, you will have the tools to do so.
For those with a finished manuscript
ā You have a finished first draft but sharing it with someone feels TERRIFYING.
ā You are overwhelmed by how to start the revision process.
ā Want to make sure everyone loves your characters as much as you do.
ā Ready to have fresh eyes on your novel because you KNOW itās going to be someoneās favourite
The Basic Edit
Chapter feedback
Emailed assessment/feedback on your novel with resources.
30min call to chat post edit
PRICES:
$497 Manuscripts 75k words or less
$697 Manuscripts 100k words PLUS
The Full Developmental Edit
Chapter feedback and inline comments
Full novel assessment (2500 words)
Resources to help make your novel stronger
50 min call post edit to go over any questions
0.02 CAD per word
*Payment plans available for both
The magic happens in the journey.
Writing your book is only the beginning.
What does a developmental edit look like?
What does a developmental edit look like?
PHASE ONE:
Send me a 1000 word sample of your novel. This is a great way to get an idea of how I provide feedback and if it lines up with your writing goals.
PHASE TWO: Ghost mode (in a good way)
Relax while I dive into your novel and provide chapter by chapter feedback, resources and manuscript assessment.
Editing happens in 10-20k sections which usually take up to 10 business days. This allows for payment plans
PHASE THREE:
You get your novelās edits back via word doc celebrating what is working and what I loved. You will also get resources and supportive feedback that maintains the authenticity of the story while elevating it.
PHASE FOUR:
Once your novel is complete you will receive either an emailed assessment or a full editorial assessment summarizing the overall feedback of your novel.
Book your 45min call to go over feedback and answer any questions.
*Novels 75K take appox 6 weeks to edit.
PHASE FIVE:
Choose your own adventure-keep editing, send your book to beta readers or start the publishing process.
FAQs
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You need to have finished draft to get the most out the experience.
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Yes! A $100 deposit secures your space and it taken off the first round of edits. I edit in 10-20k sections and will send you an invoice after each section is complete. Once it's paid I'll start on your next section.
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It comes down to budget and how polished your manuscript is. Both editing packages offer high level feedback and will set you for success. You will leave confident and ready to tackle the revision process.
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This depends on the type of edit and word count. Typically a full developmental edit will be completed as quickly as 6 weeks. It's super important to make sure our timelines align if you have deadlines.
Testimonials
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A. Huber
I am so appreciative of the time, care, and effort you gave to my novel. Your feedback was amazing and considerate. You really showed that you understood the novel's intention of exploring a marriage, it's ups and downs, and that pivotal moment when two people are on the cusp of making monumental decisions about their future. I can't thank you enough for the encouragement and the confidence to tackle this piece to make it even better. You gave my novel such a careful read and really highlighted the potential hurdles that may have been causing some of the rejections I have received. Your careful notes were so kind and encouraging and has really made me enthusiastic to re-edit this piece and try and kick it back out into the world.
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D. Rangel
I so appreciate your voice as an editor and the way you critique with such a genuinely positive slant, I can tell you wonāt let any authors feel totally crushed by critiques or suggested changes but encourage and support the creativity and make the author feel more confident in their abilities to make a scene stronger or make a character arc more involved. I didnāt know what to expect but I certainly expected more harsh criticism and was so delighted by the encouraging way you critique.
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D. Laj
Wonderful! I've had beta readers in the past but your feedback really pushed on some of the scenes to develop more while also helping me streamline things.
Letās get this party started.
My free gift to you
You are a writer: free mini course
WHY YOU NEED THIS COURSEā¦.
Learn how to support yourself when self doubt gets a little too loud.
Spark your creativity and discover the power of play.Simple practices that help you to get writing.
What you get:
A workbook to connect to your inner artist with practical tools and resources to get writing.
Meditations to connect to your inner artist and relax your nervous system
A digital journal for you to go deeper, journaling prompts to spark self-exploration.
4x15 min training videos to help you get writing
Sign up, and you get all the magic sent to your email!!
